2007年沈陽市中考英語滿分作文范文
The school was built three years ago. Before that hundreds of children couldn’t go to school，because they were very poor. Later the local government was offered over two million yuan by people for “Hope Project”. Thus the school came into being.
Now there are sixty teachers and nine hundred pupils in this school. You can see the bright teaching-building with eighteen classrooms, a computer room, a sound lab and a library. In front of the building pupils can play on the playground with a size of 1,200 square meters.
The school has been well-known in the nearby area. The students there study very hard，because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school.
點評：同樣，這是另外一篇根據(jù)提示信息完成的文章，作者使用了非常準確地語言把提示信息簡潔明了地表達出來。本文表達通順流暢，基本無語法錯誤，作者能夠準確地翻譯提示信息中的一些專有詞匯，如computer room, sound lab, 可見作者平時還是有一定的積累量。
The school was built three years ago. Before that hundreds of children couldn’t go to school，because they were very poor. Later the local government was offered over two million yuan by people for “Hope Project”. Thus the school came into being.
Now there are sixty teachers and nine hundred pupils in this school. You can see the bright teaching-building with eighteen classrooms, a computer room, a sound lab and a library. In front of the building pupils can play on the playground with a size of 1,200 square meters.
The school has been well-known in the nearby area. The students there study very hard，because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school.
點評：同樣，這是另外一篇根據(jù)提示信息完成的文章，作者使用了非常準確地語言把提示信息簡潔明了地表達出來。本文表達通順流暢，基本無語法錯誤，作者能夠準確地翻譯提示信息中的一些專有詞匯，如computer room, sound lab, 可見作者平時還是有一定的積累量。
